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I look out my window
and into the night.
I see all the stars
burning so bright.
As I gaze from afar,
I think to myself
'How elegant is that star!'
I turn from the window
and out the door
to get a better view
to look out ashore.
A sea of stars
floods the night sky.
I look out in amazement
and say "Oh my!"
I see each star
burning ever so brightly
and I wonder to myself
why I don't do this nightly.
I sit for hours and hours
and gaze up at the sky,
then they went out one by one
and I wondered why.
The night had turned to dawn
and I looked once more at the sky.
I saw the last star
and waved good-bye.
....Okay, not one I would normally write, but last week in class we could get bonus points for writing a poem. It could be anything concerning astronomy: planets, the moon, stars, etc. I thought it would be a little easier to write one about the stars. This poem didn't take me nearly as long as any of my other poems, this one only took me around 5 minutes. That's pretty short compared to how long it normally takes me to write poems, which is around half an hour or even longer. I'd have to say, for that little bit of time it took me to write this, it turned out pretty good. Just not as good as some of my other poems. ^^;

well, enjoy! ;p
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:iconjust-like-a-berfly:
just-like-a-berfly Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
AW! :3
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:icontechn0vert:
techn0vert Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
.....it's not that good. I only wrote it in 8th hour for that poetry bonus thingie.
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:iconjust-like-a-berfly:
just-like-a-berfly Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
I likey. Me likey your avi too.
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:icontechn0vert:
techn0vert Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks....
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:iconjust-like-a-berfly:
just-like-a-berfly Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
No prob.
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techn0vert Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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Kawaiilittlepuppy Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2008
This one sounds really good! :D
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:icontechn0vert:
techn0vert Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
........not really. I need to write more, though. ^^;
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:iconkawaiilittlepuppy:
Kawaiilittlepuppy Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2008
I still think its good! :glomp:
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:icontechn0vert:
techn0vert Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
well thenlies yew buddy! :D :glomp: :hug: :love: :heart:
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